They are some excellent points you're raising Adam. I didn't realise how pretentious the quote sounded until you said something, but I'm glad you did. And I did notice the typographic errors, but I only saved it as jpeg because I'm an idiot and don't have the file to edit. I'll probably just remove the whole thing in the end.
Thanks again for the feedback guys! It's very helpful. I also plan to remove most of the Woronora images and just link to the rest of the images via flickr.
3DKiwi, I didn't realise the scrolling thing would be such an issue for people. I do like the idea of a slideshow, but the slideshow on cargo collective gives me trouble. Hopefully I'll figure out a way around it.