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12 hours ago, Cerbera said:

I think that hat rack is just a bit too small - don't people usually reach up to put their hats on those things ? And I think I've only ever seen them made out of wood for some reason ! :)

 

Also, if I may, I think your shadows are really very black and could do with being a little less dense, and the floor seems a little evenly lit compared to the rest of it, or perhaps it's just a little too bright ? Lastly, whilst I appreciate that the richer people are the less taste they tend to have when home decorating, are you sure you want the red of that carpet next to that orange on the floor ? ;) 

 

CBR

I totally overlooked the scale of the hatrack, I'll work on that. I have seen more iin metal than wood but also, it needed to be more visible in this shot. As for the rest - I had better watch some Home and garden TV pronto!  LOL

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This does look much better ::)

 

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Still moving along on this thing. I am a little over 2/3rds done with the animation. The police officer is pretty poorly done in terms of his geometry and I thought I could just fake it... and i can but it's more problem than it's worth in the long run.  This image is slightly gruesome, but blame Poe not me,  didn't write it!  :)

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Done I guess!  I didn't rush through this by any means and it pointed out some things I improving with but still need to work on. Like walking characters... I think I tend to exaggerate walks because of my Dramatic reading series where everything is exaggerated! I have  a couple Poe's tales on the back burner, they will stay there for now I want to work on a couple new characters and hoping a new series plus a new Dramatic reading short.  I HATE my voice but it's all I had for this one, sorry! 

 

 

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another excellent production, you do this so well.

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9 hours ago, bobc4d said:

another excellent production, you do this so well.

You are too kind as always! 

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A one man studio, congratulations!

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2 hours ago, Anthony Owen said:

A one man studio, congratulations!

To be honest, animation was something I have always been into, since I worked with actual film but I was finding it impossible to tell stories by gathering actors and other people to get that done so... one want studio it is!  For me it's about telling stories and it's AMAZING to me I get to do it like this. Keeps me off the streets! (Mostly). 

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 Tell Tale Heart will be presented at the "Another Hole in the head" film festival in San Francisco this November. If anyone is in the area, please go and feel free to tell everyone how much you love my film!  LOL

 

15th Annual Another Hole in the Head
SF IndieFest’s Genre Film Festival
November 28 – December 12, 2018
www.ahith.com
 

 

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