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I've just started this for a client, any comments will be gratefully received.

 

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Great!!

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Those material are very nice. Light is great. The curtains are awesome.

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Maybe the green is a little less realistic. But, hey, who am I?

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Congrats.

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João Marco

 

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I like the overall feel of and light in the scene - lovely job there - really pleasing diffuse shadows...

 

I think I'd move the camera focus to the front of the sofa - it's a great texture that deserves to be sharp somewhere :) And maybe too much DoF overall ?

Also with JM about the plant - could it be little more variegated / glossy ? And less green. Those things are always darker than you think when there's no light behind them.

 

CBR

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I agree with most of the above.  The plant looks like plastic here and needs better shaders.  I don't know that the DOF is helping you here much.  It's a great start - keep going.

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The Depth of Field is making me think this is a small model.

 

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  • Thanks for the replies, the image has changed a little since last I showed it:

     

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    Hi,

     

    Not bad, but couple things to mention:

     

    - First, camera focus, or point of view/interest, is not defined clearly, you should zoom out a little bit and bring focus to some object, for example bed.

     

    - There are overexposed/burn out places, use tone mapping

     

    - Add AO, to bring contact shadows in life, looks to clean

     

    - Add some vignette

     

    Cheers,

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