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  • Hey guys , I'm back at it again with another feedback request ;P

    Just wondering what your thoughts are on my new project? Im making these renders but they just don't look right, but not sure what Im doing wrong. Any help is much appreciated :)

     

    https://www.behance.net/gallery/34766059/SpaceHelmetBoyy?

     

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    Too much reflection dude :) Looks like your visor is sheet metal. But I'm a big fan of hot pink and blue, so I like the overall idea and lighting concept.

    Why is it so blurry and dirty ? Space people take REALLY good care of their helmets :) Or has it been floating in space for a while ?

    If it was me I'd make that visor really dark and glossy and glassy, and have that reflection way way down in the mix. I'd also make any dirt and scratches much more subtle and not as all-consuming.

    Of course that's only my thoughts, which you are free to entirely disregard - but anyway, have fun finishing it off...

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  • Thanks @cerbera! really insightful stuff will get woking on that noww :D

     

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    what i think is you need to seperate the BG from the object a bit.

    the edges of the object are dark making it not stand out

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  • Yea truu dat

    Thanks man!

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    another thing is it has one contrast.

    create a hightlight on the object.

     

    here is what i mean

    hightlight.thumb.png.510a484464e5f753b50

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